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:iconmeggasweetsmiles:
Ok so your game looks professional, it's got nice graphics, animation looks believable and smooth, there are no glitches and the game works smoothly. The character does slow down when she gets near to the cursor and so i find i have to re-adjust my position however this looks like it was intentional. the bushes at the bottom look like they are supposed to be 3D items. I first thought they were designs(drawings) on the cake stand. maybe break the line at the base of the stand and have to bushes appear to sit in the middle of the stage (also applies to the cupcakes). It's just me being nitty picky but the cake stand can tapper off at the top and show a tiny bit of perspective, nothing crazy. I think this along with the bush thing, would help add some depth.

I really like the fact that you did not reveal everything in the little tutorial. The tutorial itself was interesting as you made it interactive and very short. Finding out what things do was quite fun and now i understand how the game works, i want to try and get a really high score.

I think a bit of story may help sell your game and get players more interested. Just a bit of back-story, is she working in a cafe? is she a housemaid working to feed some baby cakes to monsters?
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jjjayvijayvion1 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Student Artist
DONT READ THIS. YOU WILL BE KISSED ON THE BEST DAY OF YOUR LIFE. NOW THAT YOU'VE STARTED READING, DONT STOP. THIS IS SO FREAKY. 1 say your name 10 times 2. say your mum's name 5 times and your crushes name 3 times 4. paste this onto 4 other games. If you do this, your crush will kiss you on the nearest Friday possible. But if you read this and do not paste this, you will get bad luck. SEND THIS ON 5 DIFFERENT GAMES IN 143 MINUTES. WHEN YOUR DONE, PRESS F6 AND YOUR CRUSHES NAME WILL APPEAR IN BIG LETTERS. THIS IS SO FREAKY IT ACTUALLY WORKS
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zarkua Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Student Digital Artist
здорова мугл
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:iconmoogl:
Moogl Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
О! Приветы)
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Moogl Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Play and compete with your friends on Facebook:
apps.facebook.com/rainbowcakes…
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NicksFluffyShit Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconforeveraloneplz: Friends?
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:iconmoogl:
Moogl Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Friends!
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NicksFluffyShit Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconminglalalaplz: Someday I'll learn what this means... xD
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:iconmoogl:
Moogl Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Someday, yeah)
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NicksFluffyShit Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconinulickplz::iconmoogl::iconinusuckplz:
Thanky~
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:iconmoogl:
Moogl Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
WoW! ^__^
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NicksFluffyShit Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah todays top score! YAY!!!
THANK YOU FOR THAT CUTE GAME!!!
(Спасибо за милую игрушку, мне понравилась, молодец! =^_^=)
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:iconmoogl:
Moogl Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
And thank you too!
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Blazythehedgehog Featured By Owner May 31, 2013   Artist
my score is 14100
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:iconmoogl:
Moogl Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Wow! ThanX!
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CyberTheHedgehog270 Featured By Owner May 20, 2013
Of all time I am 9th place. -W-
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:iconmoogl:
Moogl Featured By Owner May 21, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Cool!
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:iconcyberthehedgehog270:
CyberTheHedgehog270 Featured By Owner May 21, 2013
Thanks. :la:
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:iconmoogl:
Moogl Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Hello friends! This game is now available for iPhone and iPad!
Enjoy it!
Play and win!
Here are links to iTunes: [link]
and [link]
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Luna--Cat Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You did a really good job on this!
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:iconmoogl:
Moogl Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you. This game is now available for the iphone and ipad: [link]
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TisMatty Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This game so much fun! Can't stop playing 'cause of the music!
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:iconmoogl:
Moogl Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you) Soon this mini game will be available for ios.
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TisMatty Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Can't wait
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MeggaSweetSmiles Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Student Filmographer
omg i wrote an in-depth critique for you then lost it and had to start over again then accidentally posted it on someones elses' game. BWAAHHHH!!! :nuu:
*super embarased face*
:onfire:

why am i so determined to get you this critique?
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:iconmoogl:
Moogl Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
lol
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Xeus5 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Very well programed, and the graphics are awesome same as sound, Great game! very fun
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:iconmoogl:
Moogl Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanx))
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SystemOfATea Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist
It's too awesome! I love it!
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:iconmoogl:
Moogl Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
ThanX) I loved too!
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RachelNoelDesigns Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Student General Artist
Very cool I love the colors and characters! Today's my birthday so this game rocked when I saw it!
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:iconmoogl:
Moogl Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Ooh! Happy Birthday! I wish you good mood and positive!
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:iconrachelnoeldesigns:
RachelNoelDesigns Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Student General Artist
Thankyou!!
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:iconmoogl:
Moogl Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank You!!
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:iconrachelnoeldesigns:
RachelNoelDesigns Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Student General Artist
your welcome
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Blaze1090 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Student General Artist
a game..? on dA..!?
what will they come up with next :XD:
lol very cute, nice job!:heart:
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:iconmoogl:
Moogl Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you. The next game will be a different game play
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:iconstickfigures123:
stickfigures123 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013
so fun!
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:iconmoogl:
Moogl Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanx)))
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shangerz Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013
Great game :D
I love making games too although I can't code very well haha :dead: I'm more into graphics :)
I think keyboard controls would have suited this game better..
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:iconmoogl:
Moogl Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
I thought about the keyboard, but it is not convenient to do then accelerated movement. Thanks for the tip.)
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Unipolly Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013
This is a really addicting game XDDD
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:iconmoogl:
Moogl Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you. I also like the game)
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eppoif1 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013
That was really, really fun, no joke! I enjoyed playing!
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:iconmoogl:
Moogl Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks, Enjoy the health, sorry for the presence of Advertising, but it is a wish sponsor.
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:iconeppoif1:
eppoif1 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013
It's alright, I don't mind.
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:iconmoogl:
Moogl Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
))
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GyroGun Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Constructive ciritisize, go.

Music: Bad and unfitting, does not fit hte cutesy theme at all. You should have gone with somthing upbeat and soft, or somthing cutesy and retro/chiptune-ish. Worked for the other game I reviewd

Gameplay: A physics Based catching game is good, but mouse controls, bad. Theres lag in some of hte preformance, andI do like the idea of a wanring, but it's a little too slow for when it comes down.

Grapthics: Tastes like diabeties. Too much color and too many smiles, but atleast it's not a dark and gloomy game. :3 But the colors can sometimes be distracting.

2/5
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:iconmoogl:
Moogl Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Well, if you do not like it, you can not play), but I uchtu your wish for other games) Look at yourself, there is no picture, why so bad?)
Here is the way my game is: [link]
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GyroGun Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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